PERSUASIVE WRITING
Our persuasive essays were used as ways to represent what we most cared about. We went through multiple drafts, constantly refining our work to understand how to write about claim, evidence, reasoning, and thesis statements.
Each student wrote about their social topic. My topic was the issues that go on in the fashion industry that have to do with the environment. I often explain about the connection humans and nature have and how urbanization is putting our happiness at risk. In bringing it all back together, I carefully state that only by using a greater developed environmental design, would urbanization create an ambient presence for humans to feel happier.
We learned how to correctly write a thesis. After many drafts, my thesis sentence was "Today’s form of worldwide urbanization must be fused with an architectural design principle of nature in order to increase happiness, decrease violence, and prolong the existence of humans on Earth.
Each student wrote about their social topic. My topic was the issues that go on in the fashion industry that have to do with the environment. I often explain about the connection humans and nature have and how urbanization is putting our happiness at risk. In bringing it all back together, I carefully state that only by using a greater developed environmental design, would urbanization create an ambient presence for humans to feel happier.
We learned how to correctly write a thesis. After many drafts, my thesis sentence was "Today’s form of worldwide urbanization must be fused with an architectural design principle of nature in order to increase happiness, decrease violence, and prolong the existence of humans on Earth.